Narrative Update
Today and yesterday I have been doing a quick set of thumbnails for my cave paintings, and as a result, have slightly changed my narrative. Before, my narrative involved the protagonist going through a few miscarriages with his wife but at the same time dealing with little battles with other tribes, I have taken out the fighting element of this narrative as I want to focus more on the protagonist and his character development.
Below are my initial thumbnails.
01:
The protagonist is born.
02:
His dad hands him a hunting spear.
03:
There is a celebration for the coming of age for our protagonist.
04:
He gets married.
05:
The protagonist is hunting with his father.
06:
His father is murdered by someone.
07:
He is handed ceremonial club as he becomes the new chieftain.
08:
Wife is giving pregnant.
09:
Wife has a miscarriage.
10:
Protagonist comes home from hunting and sees wife crying.
11:
She tells him that she lost the baby.
12:
Wife is pregnant again.
13:
Protagonist comes home to find trail of blood.
14:
leads to wife to reveal a second miscarriage.
15:
The protagonist hits her out of frustration.
16:
Angry.
17:
Kills a lot of animals in his frustration.
18:
Wife is pregnant again but the protagonist doesn't care much.
19:
In his wife's hour of need he is there to help her out.
20:
He is holding the newly born baby.
21:
He tries to help his wife up....but she is dead.
22:
Walks away with the baby.
23:
Holds baby off a cliff (i am going to change how this particular scene plays out, it wont be as brutal as this).
24:
Falls to knees as the baby falls.
25:
Regrets his actions.
26:
Cries.
27:
runs down to find the body.
28:
cries at the scene.
29:
leaves his ceremonial club behind as he leaves the tribe for good.
30:
he is walking the wilderness while getting older and being tormented by the death of his baby.
31:
Fights a bear with only his bare hands.
32:
Sees cave up on side of mountain.
33:
Entrance of cave.
Below are my initial thumbnails.
01:
The protagonist is born.
His dad hands him a hunting spear.
There is a celebration for the coming of age for our protagonist.
He gets married.
05:
The protagonist is hunting with his father.
His father is murdered by someone.
He is handed ceremonial club as he becomes the new chieftain.
Wife is giving pregnant.
Wife has a miscarriage.
Protagonist comes home from hunting and sees wife crying.
She tells him that she lost the baby.
Wife is pregnant again.
Protagonist comes home to find trail of blood.
leads to wife to reveal a second miscarriage.
The protagonist hits her out of frustration.
Angry.
Kills a lot of animals in his frustration.
Wife is pregnant again but the protagonist doesn't care much.
In his wife's hour of need he is there to help her out.
He is holding the newly born baby.
He tries to help his wife up....but she is dead.
Walks away with the baby.
Holds baby off a cliff (i am going to change how this particular scene plays out, it wont be as brutal as this).
Falls to knees as the baby falls.
Regrets his actions.
Cries.
runs down to find the body.
28:
cries at the scene.
leaves his ceremonial club behind as he leaves the tribe for good.
he is walking the wilderness while getting older and being tormented by the death of his baby.
Fights a bear with only his bare hands.
Sees cave up on side of mountain.
Entrance of cave.
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